Monday, February 9, 2009

Cork 18


Huzzahs go out to Tom Carroll for the edit assist on this Cork. I fixed it per his suggestion and now it feels funnier... well, if not funnier in your mind, then hopefully better paced!

7 comments:

  1. Right ... here I am redesigning the strip (again??). I would think it more effective if the 3nd to last panel was broken in two. That way it might be possible to do a reveal on the answer, as in:

    Top Panel: Two ...
    Bottom Panel ... tentacles ...

    Just a minor case of redesign-itis on my part. Joke works fine as is.

    ;-)

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  2. Hmm, not bad Tom. I like it, although I don't have much room left for another shot. It might take some pain in the ass photoshopping...

    ... actually I just looked at it again and I could keep everything the same, just put Sam's 'how many fingers' question in panel two and start Cork's 'Two...' in the next panel. Hmmm, I think that'll work better. Good work ol' what's your name.

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  3. heh heh ... two minds with but a single thought ... $UCCE$$!!

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  4. Nice suggestion Tom. It does work better. Great job Scott. Not everyone is willing to take that extra bit of time and trouble to re-do something just to make it a little better.

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  5. Scott is a rare find indeed ...

    And Cork, too!!

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  6. Nice catch Tom!! It is better now. Timing! Yes!!

    Last panel might be a little busy around her head. Or not.

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