Excellent handling of the added detail on the flyer. It supports the main shapes without distracting from or overwhelming them.I like the idea of seating a figure on the flyer. Hope to see it fleshed out next version.
Nice improvements. The two shapes in the joystick area bother me. I'd say lose the thin stalked , bulb at the top shape. I don't think we can clearly know what it is. It also has an anti stream line shape that makes it seem very "kluged" on. ( I first heard the word kluge at Leland Corp.)
Very nice! Nice job of "plussing" them out. I don't feel the need to see a whole figure on the bike--I like the urgency of the stick man--but then, I don't possess "art-director think."And I disagree with Ellis; I like the sex-toy aspect.
Maybe draw a little highlight gleam over the roll bar. And I disagree with Marty for disagreeing with me.Maybe on the REMAINING joystick, have the side closest to the driver be a smooth curve, vs the knobbiness
Wonderful stuff - can't thank you all enough for pointed these things out! I think the piece still has a cartoony feel to it.. which I'm going to try to avoid in the next vehicle.Thanks again amigos!