Heyas,
I have six object concepts to show ya - all with a sci-fi angle to them. Asking for your crits1
In this first pairing, I like the second one more than the first. The translator just seems to have an odd camera angle. No rotation of the image removes this feeling for me.
I like the generator. I think I'd like the translator more if the z protruding shapes were lost. Complete the static noise window, mend all the areas that the extruded piece masked.
ReplyDeleteIt would simplify and strengthen it.
Very cool. I like em both, but maybe the translator would benefit from being shown in use? Put a human (or humanoid?) in the scene yakking into it, and maybe we'd get a better sense of scale and function?
ReplyDeleteSense of scale! D'oh! And the elimination of the z protrusion is a good idea too. I don't think I'll put the translator into the portfolio, but at least now I know how to fix it if there's a future opportunity to use it.
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